WALT:write a description about our dojo monster
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 22 May 2020
dojo monster!
WALT:write a description about our dojo monster
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tena koe e hoa Logan,
ReplyDeletewow this has some great describing words here, I love this, your monster is really cute Logan. I like how you payed attention to detail here by saying about the teeth,this reminds me of when My dojo monster was posted,next time you could say a question to people without a dojo monster? what is your dojo monsters Friends names?
what im saying on that question is if you had a monster what would it look like
DeleteHi Logan, I love your description is so detailed. If i had a monster It would have sleek back fur with one green eye and one red the red eye would have a scar.
ReplyDeletehey logan its me molly my dojo is the same as yours!!!!
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